Warriors The Dark Hallows Wiki:Charart/Approval Page

=Art for Approval=

Leafpool (Q) ~ For Approval


Wow, Leafpool took forever to do! Good?

04:36, November 24, 2018 (UTC)

Could you largen the pupils a bit. Other than that this looks amazing.

04:37, November 24, 2018 (UTC)

Re-ups: Pupils should be large now.

CBA? Minkclaw Merry Christmas! 18:02, November 24, 2018 (UTC)

Hate to break, but maybe add shading to the back legs and tail and defne the shading on the head? Malina457 (talk) 15:43, November 25, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Re-ups: Made shading on back legs. Made more shading.

Define the earpink. Define the light source as well? Might just be me, but I'm having a hard time pin pointing where it's coming from. 04:23, November 27, 2018 (UTC)

Still working? Minkclaw Merry Christmas! 00:55, December 3, 2018 (UTC)

Breezepelt (Kit) - For Approval
It's been a rough one Malina457 (talk) 00:39, November 27, 2018 (UTC)Malina

I'd definitely recommend smoothing out his shading.  Thi    evi    ng    Fer    ret   03:35, November 27, 2018 (UTC)

Art programs hate my soul, withdrawing, EDIT, going to try :'D Malina457 (talk) 00:44, November 28, 2018 (UTC)malina

reups Malina457 (talk) 02:01, November 28, 2018 (UTC)malina

unless this gets approved ill have to withdraw, lost the file -malina

hate to be rude, but, comments? for both my images? -Malina

could you lighten the base so its not so dark? Right now it looks pure black. User:Minkclaw/Sig 01:47, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

Ravenkit (K) ~ For Approval
I may, or may not, love black cats Malina457 (talk) 04:25, November 28, 2018 (UTC)malina

could you blur/smudge the shading a lot, it looks rough and blotchy. Minkclaw Merry Christmas! 20:35, November 28, 2018 (UTC)

reups Malina457 (talk) 22:38, November 28, 2018 (UTC)malina

could you lighten the base so its not so dark? Right now it looks pure black. User:Minkclaw/Sig 01:48, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

Mottlekit (K) - For Approval
This blank and I hate each other. I also love his mottled pawpad, I will not change it because it is adorable.  Thi    evi    ng    Fer    ret   21:40, November 28, 2018 (UTC)

This is adorable, it looks like the shading is leaking on the tail tip. Minkclaw Merry Christmas! 22:09, November 28, 2018 (UTC)

I think it was a sneaky patch of white on his base pattern. Re-ups.  Thi    evi    ng    Fer    ret   01:58, November 29, 2018 (UTC)

theres some waste by --> back foot Malina457 (talk) 13:26, November 29, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Smokekit (K) - For Approval
I like this kid.  Thi    evi    ng    Fer    ret   02:23, November 29, 2018 (UTC)

Could you smoothen the texture in the white bits? It seems a bit rough. Minkclaw   Merry Christmas!  00:57, December 3, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? User:Minkclaw/Sig 01:50, January 27, 2019 (UTC)